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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ There can be more than one bf-session object with the same name within the patch
 ## bf-instrument 
 A bf-instrument represents a musical instrument within the bf-pd system. Each instrument joins a bf-session and can contain bf-params and bf-outputs. To create an instrument you should instantiate a bf-instrument with the name of your instrument, e.g. [bf-instrument myDrumMachine]. 
 
-The audio output of your instrument should be connected to the first inlet of bf-instrument object. The interface for has an *activity monitor* which shows a simple representation of the changing spectrum of the instrument's sound, and the activity for each bf-instrument in the bf-session appears in the *collaboration window*. (Note: you must also send your audio to [dac~] in order to hear it!) 
+The audio output of your instrument should be connected to the first inlet of bf-instrument object. The interface has an *activity monitor* which shows a simple representation of the changing spectrum of the instrument's sound, and the activity for each bf-instrument in the bf-session appears in the *collaboration window*. (Note: you must also send your audio to [dac~] in order to hear it!) 
  
 The *collaboration window* can be opened with the toggle in the bf-instrument object. If musicians enter or leave the session you may need to close and re-open the collaboration window.
 
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ The *collaboration window* can be opened with the toggle in the bf-instrument ob
 
 
 ## bf-param 
-A bf-param creates a user parameter within the bf-pd system. A bf-param can be controlled by the user of the bf-instrument it belongs to, and the bf-param will also be accessible to other instruments within the bf-session, via the collaboration window, if the user of the bf-instrument grants access.
+A bf-param creates a user parameter within the bf-pd system. A bf-param can be controlled by the user of the bf-instrument it belongs to, and the bf-param will also be accessible to other instruments within the bf-session via the collaboration window, if the owner of the bf-instrument grants access.
 
-A bf-param object has a user interface within the instrument patch itself, and it creates a user interface in the collaboration window of each musician in the session.
+A bf-param object has a user interface within the instrument patch itself, and it also creates a user interface in the collaboration window of each musician in the session.
 
 A bf-param can be one of four *types*:
 * *cont* are numbers between 0.0 and 1.0.
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ A bf-param can be one of four *types*:
 * *bool* can take values of 0 or 1.
 * *bang* are bang messages which are used to trigger actions.
 
-A bf-param can be a single instance of its type or it can be a multiple, which creates an array of values within a single bf-param object. For example, a bf-param "8 bool" creates an interface with 8 toggles, and might be used to represent 8 on/off values in a drum machine sequencers.
+A bf-param can be a single instance of its type or it can be a multiple, which creates an array of values within a single bf-param object. For example, a bf-param "8 bool" creates an interface with 8 toggles, and might be used to represent 8 on/off values in a drum machine sequencer.
 
 ###### Arguments:
 1. The name of the instrument, e.g. "myDrumMachine".
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ A bf-param can be a single instance of its type or it can be a multiple, which c
 3. The dimensionality of the parameter, e.g. "8"
 4. The type of the parameter, e.g. "bool"
 
-So a parameter to store 8 drum machine note triggers would be:
+So a bf-param with 8 drum machine note triggers would be:
 `[bf-param myDrumMachine kickOnOff 8 bool]` and creates this object within your patch:
 
 ![bf-param_example](/uploads/114e1a4d5f4c38d21eac50bbcebe5509/bf-param_example.png)